07.22.05

sickriotgirl

Name Is it kind of like the song by Good Charlotte? It's alright I suppose. [3/5]

First Impression "Yucky!" [4/10]

Layout
What I like: The white background and potential expressiveness.
What I don't like: The whole layout. It is just a poorly coded layout and it's yucky. I use Firefox, and it shows up not-so-good. You need a new layout. Firefox is the up-and-coming browser, and that's the one I use. If the layout doesn't show up well there, then it's poorly coded. Please stop by Francey.Org because she has layouts that I think you'd love.

[16/20]

Content Isn't this a blessed feeling? I adore it. This entry is an outlet for your fear of relationships. Oh, lol. I am not a swearer myself (except the rare occasions when I hit my head on something and out pops a word), so I can relate. I like you even more after reading this entry. Weird- just weird. Above all else, I get the impression that you are a very confused person and you express that through your entries. Just the way you said, "I seriously don't think I'm ready for a relationship, no matter who they are. I want this to work. I really do." Greatly expressed. This gave me some confidence in you. You choose your battles. This is good.

From what I've read, (and face it- as a reviewer, I'm not going to know the real you after any amount of entries I've read) I get the impression that you are an angsty person who expresses their confusion and anger through their blogs. It's ok for some people, but it's not my style. But, you do have fairly good grammar and spelling. [17/30]

Contact Notes and that's it.[2/5]

Errors The layout is one. [9/10]

Extras You had one. Please get some more:) [7/15]

Extra Credit Yay for number 70 on your 101 things list. Why? I am the same way. And I'm not even that type of dressy-up person. [1]

Favorite Entry This really fun to read.[5/5]

Your new name is Lana.

You should be an artist.

Reviewed by Beth

Comments/Suggestions Girl, your diary is fine. I am very much turned off by your layout, and with that change, a re-review would do you some justice:)

Total Score {64/100}